i don't know how to say this, but this guy had some real talent, and to see such potential talent disappear is extremely disappointing. we battled a few times over AIM and i could tell that he was one of the few people on this site that truly took his poetry seriously. i was going to strike up a collab with him, and so i really don't know what to say.

wow... that was sad, thanks for sharing though... makes me feel... heavy...

The wording was perfect, I love the way it fits together! I like that the rhyme scheme is loose, I think it definately allowed the phrases to be more powerful. A poem to be proud of, for sure... My regards to the writer (rest in peace, so sorry not to have known you).

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