The flow was a bit rocky with alternateing from a ryming pattern to the opposite. But I personally really enjoyed it. I liked the transitions from "I" to "They" and back again in each stanza. Very well put together with a well-versed point. :)

parent/kid thingy? Anyway, good poem.

Once again. My God! Very good! You really know how to get into the head of the reader! (at least mine)

pretti good