|Reviews for Lies|
| Little Miss Shadow 2/5/03 . chapter 1
The flow was a bit rocky with alternateing from a ryming pattern to the opposite. But I personally really enjoyed it. I liked the transitions from "I" to "They" and back again in each stanza. Very well put together with a well-versed point. :)
| sinister velvet 10/30/01 . chapter 1
parent/kid thingy? Anyway, good poem.
| Jezchan 1/26/01 . chapter 1
Once again. My God! Very good! You really know how to get into the head of the reader! (at least mine)
| dEmEntEd signed review 1/18/01 . chapter 1