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| Victim of the Wraith 2005-01-18 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a good random thought. Because poetry is just that. The way one person reads a poem may be different from the way another person would read a poem. The way it is broken up does control the flow and you are alsolutely right. Nice job. I like the choppiness. It made it seem like it was echoing in my mind a little bit. Nice job. Great work. |