Very nice, after reading it the first realistic wall that came to mind was the Berlin Wall?? But it could also be a theoretical wall. So it depends on how you see it as the writer I suppose. Though all-in-all wonderful imagery and details. Good job.

Gorgeous imagery. I didn't like all of the commas, but the grammatical aspect wasn't important. I loved the message this sent, well done.

this is great, you describe it so well.

Hi I got to say this is beautiful always in great choice of words you used into your poem. the poem is very good in you have a wonderful talent in don't never let anybody tell you different.

Wow, I get a clear depiction of the wall in my mind. You have a very nive way of writing. I love it!

whoa. just. whoa. this is such a cool poem. the imagery really gets you. you are -such- a good writer! I loved it.

Hmm...I think I get it. Like, a war people don't pay attention to much anymore unless they're involved in gang-wars somehow. That despite even the fact people believe that there's peace, there's always a war going on that they just don't care to notice. That's what I got out of this...wonder if that was what you were aiming for...*shrugs*. Yet I really, really did like this poem. your descriptions were wonderful and it all fit together, painting quite a clear picture in my mind I must say. Well done as always,-Rae

Hehe, me again. You're great! =) Very delicate and amazing writing!

I was actually wondering if you could read "truth" and tell me what you think of it... thanks =)

Love,

~Anna

Makes me think of the ghetto. Not sure if that was the intent, but I like it.

Wow, i really like this piece. The discriptions make it seem so real.

Ah, a subject I like - war! Okay that isn't true, but this is the kind of raw, uncelebrated simplicity I like. Graffiti, muddy hand prints and crimson stains in a wall? Tragedy in its most suddenly mundane, numb sense? I like it. I especially like the ending although the hyphen kind of confuses me. Very good!

I get it, pal. I won't tell you not to write during class. I know how tedious classes can be. Rather sad, really, but I like it. Keep it up.

We get it Keith but you really should be concentrating on classwork!

Great imagary... thanks for reveiwing!

i love the way you wrote this, showing such tradegy and such dismal by those who see it every day. well done