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| Sagen Marie 2005-10-17 ch 1,   | You don't have the keenest idea about writing. Writing is an art in which one imbraces and builds upon until they create something that "a writer" titles "a masterpiece". They don't rant about worthless crap! They plan and execute. Grammer is another thing that matters to "writers", obviously you are not included in that catagory! This is what you wrote to me... a long time ago, yes. But nevertheless. You have some nerve sir. For one, that was when I was beginning as a writer, and TWO and most importantly. Writing is an Art, yes, BUT, it is an EXPRESSION of ones self. So the only category YOU are included in...is NARCACISM. Have a nice day. |
| TheLiving Dead123 2005-02-21 ch 1, | Fabulous! I am usually not big on Romantic writings, but this one is an exception. Good use of vocabulary, and the way you have set up the sentences. A great piece of literature! |
| lucidorpheus 2005-01-22 ch 1, | You have a very natural voice. I would love to read what might happen if you expanded some of your monologues into longer pieces. |
| AllyCred 2005-01-22 ch 1, | really loved this it was like soo sad and there was no hope what so ever, except maybe a little glimmer towards the end. but very well written, loved it alot. lots of love ~AllyCred~ |
| Adreena Nightingale 2005-01-18 ch 1, | This one's so well written. Good job, Bootywhack. |
| Keith Andrew 2005-01-18 ch 1, | Thats very good. the atmosphere is so lonely, so bleak, all hope of escape seems lost, yet a faint ray of hope still lies hidden in the depths. Very good-keith Andrew |