I agree with the others, this poem (and all his other writings) is purely something that requires beautiful, unique talent and you have it. It would be wonderful to have you published.

The last line is stunning. "My ascent to our passion, in hope I roved." I'm pinning this line to my office board to see everyday.

*sigh* why oh why aren't you published? What a waste of talent! This, and all your other work, belongs in a hardback volume in pride of place in the most prestigious library in the world.

It's perfect, absolutely perfect - poetry seems to be as natural as breathing to you! Never, ever, ever give it up and get on the line to a publisher! You deserve to make some money out of this ... I would buy everything you published :D

Blessed Be,

Andaren x