Nature should have her way, her vengeance. You're very environmental, I notice. I myself have been trying to help, but it's not like my protests are getting me anywhere with the government of Illinois. *Shudders* I hate Rod Blogevich, or whatever his name is. Does nothing to help whatsoever. Anyway, getting off subject here. I hope that soon people will realize we're right. Until then, you are probably right...we're going to suffer under Nature's revenge.

wow :) love your language, keltica. Great and keep it on

Awesome! Very nice flow you've got going here.

Oh, to answer your question, it was a tale inside a poem. O_O;; Lol. Thanks for the review!

brilliant message and wonderful articulation. kudos.

-lin

The tidal waves that hit so much of Asia spills forth the god of the earth which is ancient in its anger, ancient in its wrath and silent in its beauty. nicely done.

Skillfully written - dramatic imagary really worked well here :)

Blessed Be,

Andaren x

You are a truly gifted writer. Your poetry reminds me of Wordsworth, whose my altime favorite poet. Thank you for your review, I shall enjoy reading your poetry more often. If youd like to chat feel free to email any time.

Change eternal flows,

Into domains, ¿Lord, who knows?

But the sun still glows. —m—

You gave up on love,

But each second God's fine trove,

Flying high white dove. -m-

A very eloquent poem with a message that really strikes home. I think people have become too accustomed to taking nature for granted which will one day prove to be a very costly mistake. Great work :)

*cosmo-queen*

Good job, I totally agree with the message of this poem, and the form of the villanelle fits it really well, because the vengeance of nature comes as an inevitable consequence, again and again as a "retaliation´", so that as if in a cycle that repeats itself man's sins fall back on himself.