interesting... like the chant of a Froud elf.

Hi there... I haven't been around much. I love the poem. It's so... Gosh I can't find the words, but it's beautiful. I can see what happens in my mind...

ah! so creepy but i liked it..i think there is really something wrong with me. lol~rosie

This is truly amazing. I love the rhyme scheme. I can't quite put my finger on what it is, but something in this poem makes me love it and all it's haunting lines.

o Creepy I didn't see that coming.

Great rhyming! A really different poem, I love it.

That's a difficult rhyming scheme, fun to read. Well done...vampires..an interesting phenomenon.

Ooh, interesting rhyme scheme. Very interesting. I liked it. XD. Looking over some words used in the poem, am I right in assuming that the lady in the rain is a vampire? ^^

o i loved it! and the rhyming... well that was really good. i don't think i could do something like that. great job!

*SW*

Thank you for your review on Riders Ch.4 ... =)

cool! i luv it! very interesting...and the rhyming is awsome! thanx for the review on death is only the begining!

O love the ryhme scheme awesome