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| Morte d'Amour 2005-03-04 ch 1,  | abuseThis is an interesting beginning. A few grammar errors, but it was overall a good story. I like what the prophecies say. Keep up the good work. |
| Untrusting 2005-01-31 ch 1, | abusek well i like this story but i no it needs sumthing so if u could help me find out wut it is plz tell me |
| Vagrance 2005-01-18 ch 1, | abuseInteresting story. Hard to get a real grip on the plot so reading more would help. One word, show, don't tell. ^^ |