You posted! How come Riley's not in this one? I really like that guy... But anyway, I'm getting off track! This is a totally awesome story and I like the way you've elaborated on the battle scenes! Being the main character is great! Write up chapter three soon! I can't wait to see what happens to ME! LOL. (By the way, if you decide to kill me, you are so dead!) J/K :)

This is great, just like "The Land of Niani" LOVE it! Being the main character is just so much fun! Timbaray is such a pretty name, too- update soon!

I just wanted to say that I'm sorry for the mistakes in the Ninja code. Your name is supposed to be represented by a ~, but somehow, it didn't show up on this- GR! Again, I'm sorry for the inconvenience...

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Hey Stephanie! It's Whitney...LOVE LOVE LOVE this story you are such a good writer! You kept in perfect tense the entire time, and used great description and dialogue. I can't WAIT to read more! Please continue it, and soon...^^

This is great! I love the plot! You NEED to update this really soon!

I like being the main character! Keep going. I'm interested in seeing how this story turns out.