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| Ebony Dea 2005-12-31 ch 1,   | As strange as this is going to sound it's almost like something someone who's a forensic psychologist would write. I mean, there's the element of a wrong and a mental torture and then the trust of this person. If I didn't know better I'd say the person in question (who's caused the pain) is planning another way to hurt but maybe that is just my sick, overly-analytic mind... Anyway, I like it lots. Love the length of the lines and the image in my mind of two people - not fighting but not friendly either. Good job and keep it up! |
| MR.SEAN 2005-02-18 ch 1, | no regrets, why waste your time, OH a lady bug just attacked me! |
| shinco 2005-01-23 ch 1, | Well, it's good to quit the tears and stand back up again! Thanks for the reviews on "Glass Cut" and all my Haikus, too, by the way! I love 'em all! This was a cool poem, I liked it! ^_^ |