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| N. Mobbs 2005-02-20 ch 1, | abuseSpeaking of "natural voice", one should say that is exactly what you possess. Interesting poetic style, description city. Don't really understand the references to the "tan shirt" and such, unless that is your reflection out of the window. Crunched for time, so I can only review this one, but keep up the excellent literature and hopefully I can find sometime later on. Bye for now. |