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| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-24 ch 15,  | abuseThis piece was intriguing, surely. I like the dialogue bit, something about it I cannot name at the moment, and the mention of mockery at the end. Very good. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-24 ch 14, | abuseAll this change, metamorphosis. I like it! |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-24 ch 13, | abuseI remember now. I am pleased to remember. Your poem, Poet, reminds me of Tomaz Salamun. This was quite amusing as well. I like the last line. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-23 ch 12, | abuseFeels so abstract, and in it conveys the power of the individual. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-23 ch 11, | abuseHeavy with the presence of death and darkness. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-23 ch 10, | abuseIs it better to remain neutral, or take a stand? Hm... |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-23 ch 9, | abuseThis is absolutely wonderful. Truly that is what a Poet entails in their quest or their answers. It reminds me of someone, but why does the name escape me? Someone great... It will come in time. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-23 ch 8, | abuseThe reference to music brings freshness to your poem here. I love the first stanza with the "crowd wearing thick winter coats breathe steaminto the winter air" I smiled at that, what a delightful image! The imagery you present reminds me of A City in Winter. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-05-23 ch 7, | abuseLovely, and your titles are as poetic as the writing! "Darkness in machina" For some reason, reminds me of Pink Floyd. One must be independent of Beauty. I wonder what Vogue would say... The presence of the moon brings beauty? Perhaps when it is gone, we make our own beauty... Of the mind, of Reason... |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-31 ch 6, | abuseYou possess an energy, a passion, that is captured with every line. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-31 ch 5, | abuseSo cheerful you are, little dark spirit... |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-31 ch 4, | abuseWow, this was particularly empowering. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-31 ch 3, | abusePowerful and thought-provoking. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-31 ch 2, | abuseQuite lovely. |
| Nobody-n-Particular 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseYour poetry is so unique and fresh without restraint. I don't know why people don't review you more often. Perhaps they don't know you exist, and reviews usu. give them a heads-up as to your being here. I don't know why I don't review you more often. Now I have no excuse. So I will as often as time allows. :) This was breathless. |