I like the imagery. Very well done!

brillant. I loved your description. It gave me a really good visual.

this is an interesting peice it has a dreamy fantasy touch to it almost a too perfect scenery not a bad peice the visualization is good and the vocabulary is ok but it could use some more exsitement also the witty kinda end thng is nice kinda puts together the poem i'd like to read more o yourstuff i'llo try to get around to it please reveiw me if you ever get the time

nice! it has a country-ish feeling to it. i can see this running through my head. nicely done

Once again, beautiful...you have a very orginal style.

*sigh* Marry me? lol...

*eyes widen in amazment* woa...thats deep... why does everyone write better poems than me? *goes off on a pity party tangent*

Hey Keith,I just wanted to sincerely thank you for all your reviews. It means a lot to me and I'd return the favor right now, but I have to go to school here in a few.

In any case, this was a great poem. You have definite talent. All too often I have seen deep, elegant poems that made no sense at all. Here you have a combination of elegant wording and meaning. Very nice. I look forward to reading more of your work.

hi sorry i haven't been review any of your work but I got to say this. I love your poem the poem itself is really good in you can tell where you put your hole heart into. In this poem is very pretty in beautiful.

Not like the poems I usualy read, but this was great. The idea is wonderful.

Amazing! truely amazing. encredibly written and well thought-out. I loved it. it was truely beautiful.

Wow very clever, I love the whole poem, the ending is perfect. This poem creates a scene of romance. Excellent work.

Rocky

Wow, this is beautiful...I'm speecheless.

oh wow. I loved that! Especially the last stanza. made me shiver.

A beautifully written poem. I loved the clear imagery, the final ending proclaiming the figure's identity, everything. Thank you for sharing.

you cant really find that many BEAUTIFUL poems. sure you can find original ones, good ones but not many are capable of being beautiful. mine are usually ramblings (if you have the time R&R, recieving Reviews from genuine poets would be rewarding). nice romantic tone, as previously mentioned. i like the overall impression of delicacy in the protagonists' sense of love :) congrats!