It is so romantic and just like a fairy tale :)

Please do not leave the story without finishing it. I hope it has a happy ending :) like "story" ends in lovers' meeting :D

it sounds really good. you should keep going.

Wow, this is the first history-related story that I've read without being forced to, but I think that it's great so far. You did a good job getting into the time frame (with the appropriate dialogue) keep writting!

Who could it be? Eli perhaps...?

I bet it's Eli! Poor Nicoma. She wasn't even supposed to be a slave. I can't wait to see what happens next with Eli and Nicoma. Update soon!

What's going to happen to Nicoma? This is good, I'm glad I read it because I've gotten tired of the Civil War. In AP we've had to read all these Civil War books, but none of them were like this story. Good job!

This looks like it'll turn out to be another one of your awsome stories! I can't wait to read the next chapter!