Tasteful, I like it. I'm in terrible need of the criticism of a vampire story writer. I would appreciate it, and gladly return the favor

That was interesting. You almost lost me with the newcomer's description, but then there was hate and violence and all was OK :). I like how you turned the beauty and light idea into something ugly. It seems like the story could have ended with his killing, but the fear of his return makes it nice and spooky.