Ah!

This is catchy. :)

Wish I would have thought of it... :P

AvidWriter-92

Wow, this is so gorgeous!

I don't know why, but it just brought a smile to my face.

I love haiku, I think it's one of the most beautiful forms of poetry, and this is one of the best.

Amazing work, Will. Truly amazing.

*love* naomi x

10/10

This is very simple but very pleasant. I like it a lot. This is one of my favorites of your work.

Your work brings me so much joy!

Deep. I love it. I like the short ones that make you think.

short but I love it.

Short but deep. Well done.

Don't forget the gray area between... I'm a strong believer in Taoism.

It's short, but it's really good! Sometimes the shortest poems can say the most. Great job, I look forward to more. Blessed Be.

yay again!

yay again!

Short and beautiful. I like this very much.

hey, well, i already told you i liked this one...um...very good, i can't write really short ones like this...um...keep up the good work! GO READ MY STORY!

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