poor kid but will he really melt that guys heart?

Whats next, whats next.

this is a very well writen first part of the story
write more

This is cute, just adorable. I'd love to see more ... :D

::bows to your gracelyness::
I love and worship you! :she sings brightfully::

Ja ne!

~Sesshy

Well, I do like the story, but it's extremely obvious which chapter was written by afk, and not to be rude or anything, but it's not up to par with your writing. Will it ever be finished? We still haven't met Zahir! Or found out what species of creature Saku is!

PLEASE UPDATE!

Fun story. I'm a bit bemused by the fact that pleasure slaves are so prevalent, but you made it clear from the beginning that slaves are a fact of life in this setting, so it's understandable.

I can't help feeling extremely sorry for poor Saku, and just a bit for Zahir as well. It can't be nice to have your friends go behind your back, gossip about you, and then present you with a gift that says "We think you need to get laid, and don't think you can find a partner for yourself." Especially if he's hung up on someone else.

I assume that Quao is the pale boy? I have uneasy feelings that he is not going to be a favourite character. I don't know if this is on purpose, inadvertant, or if I'm reading way too much into the situation, but I am still intrigued.

I hope this story gets an update soon, I'd love to see how things develope.

X3 Bwhaha...still so beautiful. Charries are beautiful. Story beautiful...erm, stuff is beautiful Keep up the nice work.

pleause update soon! i really love this wonderful story

I echo my last statement: Poor Saku! LOL

Poor Saku!

Hey! this was great! Im so glad I have the operntunity to read this *giggels* Oh well, I guess Il leave you be...please countinue

hey, I got to love it

I'm really interested in seeing the continuation of this story. I hope the next chapter is soon. Also, I'd be real interested if there was a kind of triangle involving Quao, Zahir, and his new gift.