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| Isabella22 2006-03-29 ch 1,  | abuseLove it! It was very...soothing. And I could picture everything! Props! |
| SomethingSymbolic15 2006-03-14 ch 1, | abusethis was beautiful! Good job, once again...*sigh* I will never be as good as you... W4J |
| Passage of Thyme 2006-01-15 ch 1, | abuseHey! 'Tis A. from you-know-where! Anyway, I like the idea behind this piece and its rhyme scheme. I've never thought of winter and harps as going together, but your poem really explains it well and descirbes the feeling of winter very accurately. Nice work! |
| Fabian Cortez 2005-01-19 ch 1, | abuseHuge potential shows through here. Some excellent descriptions and choice of words create a beautiful picture. Well Done Keep Writing! F.C |
| Peaches n Eve 2005-01-19 ch 1, | abuseIt's beautiful. I love how you managed the rhyme and the repitition, almost all of it flows beautifully and sounds very natural (I'd work on the second grouping). The images are beautiful, I can't wait to read more. |