|Reviews for Serenity|
| only I stand there 1/21/05 . chapter 1
| Solanio 1/20/05 . chapter 1
A very interesting twist. - I found the beginning passages to ring painfully true with despair. I can't quite put my finger on it - but the middle seemed a bit disjointed when you described appearance - I guess the transition from mental to physical anguish just didn't flow as well for me. - However, great ending - powerful impact. - Cheers
| MrVagabond 1/20/05 . chapter 1
Very interesting story you have, though I think it's more of a thriller/suspense...kind of gut wrenching, and you don't really understand what's going on until the bitter end ) Nice work.