MY GOSH! I LUV IT! It seems like sumthin a star would sing. AWESOME

the angst threatens to strangle the message behind them at times, but otherwise not bad at all! keep at it.

(side-note: maybe you should've asked him out YOURSELF- as i guy, i can tell you- the mass of us are completely OBLIVIOUS to these kind of feelings, and often don't flatter ourselves with the thought that other people may actually feel that way)

Meh, lecture over. Nice work. Have a cookie.

Wow, I likw it.. the lyrics in the first verse/chorus/bridge/etc/ EVERYTHING ROCK!

I think you need a new title though.

I like it. it's good. some of the lyrics like wondering why why why do you hate me, are great, and I guess the title somewhat goes. I like it.

can you sing? if so, get a guitar and start playing

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damn! its really good! you got talent. sorry that happened though...he didnt deserve ya anways! well keep writing and ill keep readin! ^_^

I love the song!! I know how you feel, somebody did that to me and I got the girl to dump him..hehehe.. Anyway you keep writing! The song was amazing!