wow, total angst. i like! ^_^i especially like these lines:"Some young men seek truth and wisdom

While I bite shards of glass

As I search for a vivid freedom

Through methods of bitter last

Call me crazy quote me insane

I'll be fine as long as I"

and

"One more tumble to turn me humble

Ferrel me

Make me just another slave

Hungry eyes"i love the metaphors. well done! :)