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| EbonyWingedAngel01 2005-02-17 ch 1,   | Very good this poem shows what many people now a days do. Hypocrisy, is now becoming something that many others use. They try to lie about what they really are thinking and you happen to find their false pretense. Very good, vivid and lively. |
| Der Patrizier 2005-01-21 ch 1, | Oh, what a pieece of art. |
| Rocky G 2005-01-20 ch 1, | This poem really captures how superficial and deceiving people can be. Nice work! Rocky |
| -The Empress of the Orient- 2005-01-20 ch 1, | whoa kool song but i think there were a lot of ello's and bybye's jk this was great ^_^! |