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| Ice and Snow 2008-03-09 ch 12,  | abuseI like the plot of this story and how it's going, but I think the chapters with Rhys are too short (at least compared with Andrea). Keep up the fabulous work =D |
| sousie 2008-02-11 ch 12, | abuseupdate soon |
| Black Panther Z 2007-04-20 ch 12, | abuseOHohoh! Countinue this one too! |
| cheesecake.thief 2007-04-19 ch 12, | abuseWhy can't Andrea just think of reponses to Kaziel? In an enclosed elevator, no matter how quietly you hiss, you still make noise... |
| ShadowedEternity 2007-01-03 ch 12, anon. | abuseThis is a very intriguing story... can't wait to find out what happens next... I find it interesting how she has to speak out loud to her spirit guide. I know you're busy with your other stories but hopefully you will find some time to continue on with this. |
| Ish Mish Kiki 2006-09-04 ch 12, | abuseMuahaha upper hand my black boot~ Very very nice story, I love reading it. I hope you update soon, and yes, I will be reading more of you. *grin* |
| Lucy! 2006-08-23 ch 12, anon. | abuseOMG!! how come you're not loger wrting this story??!! i wanna know the rest of it, it's really an interesting story.there are so many things i wanna know!! pretty pls update it! i'm also reading once a slave, pretty awesome too! and you have me waiting on that one too!you are really a good writer. |
| lilylupin7 2006-08-09 ch 12, | abuseWow, I wish you would continue this story. Actually, I'm happy if you just keep writing :) But back to this, I really like the plotline and the guardian angel thing is really neat. |
| twilights aura 2006-07-28 ch 12, | abuseUpdate. @w@ |
| Yuki 2006-06-12 ch 12, anon. | abusewell the title is certainly interesting in that im not sure how it relates to the story... cuz right now i really can't see Andy and Rhys being together. I think the setup of the story is really interesting and i can't wait to see where you go with it. |
| Missy N 2006-05-23 ch 12, | abuseI keep coming back every few months to see if you've updated! You really should, I've quite enjoyed reading the story thus far. |
| Yuy Ren 2006-05-16 ch 12, | abusewahh, so intense~! |
| Grape 2005-05-19 ch 12, | abuse*laughs* This is really funny!! I like the spirit guide guy..wow that sounded weird..but really he's funny! I like this story..I hope that the next chapter comes soon. Laters. |
| Claire-a-bell 2005-05-12 ch 12, | abuseI'm so glad you posted. Another crushingly short chapter, but still. No complaints, as usual. Please continue. |
| Cooties 2005-05-12 ch 12, | abuseCool chapter. Short, but interesting. |