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| KaiserMonkey 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI still have a box of about 2,0 Magic cards XD You might want to post it at fanfiction dot net's Magic: the Gathering section, as it's technically fanfiction. |
| coeurdefurie 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abuseThe time after the battle is always the worst. It always makes you wonder if the cost was worth it. The real heroes are never the ones that come home. |
| Je-Nie-Dieu 2005-03-31 ch 1, | abuseUh-oh... don't want to give that impression. I didn't create this world, just this story. Magic the Gathering (erstwhile hobby). |
| Sharakinpaix 2005-03-30 ch 1, | abuseVivid and beautiful; you did a great job making this play out like a movie, each paragraph a different shot of the action. I love your story twists; Urza's arrival made me think about D Day. Are you going to expand on this world you have created? |
| I-Luv-Mosquiton 2005-03-10 ch 1, | abuseand if i didnt say it vefore, i hope you fall in a hole. |
| Arkash 2005-02-08 ch 1, | abuseWonderful story. It reminds me just a tiny bit to my own GAEA'S VICTORY. This is an interesting mixture of fables and facts. I've injoyed it. |