|Reviews for Transparent|
| this is britt 1/25/05 . chapter 1
everything about this poem seems so haunting and soft...then the last line gives it that extra spark of vulnerability.
| Joewhatever 1/21/05 . chapter 1
I don't know. I liked it, but it feels unfinished. Maybe that's the point? It does sound interesting. I especially like:
And you sometimes listen to what I sayWhen it’s most inconvenient
Maybe because I can relate? -_-" Anyway, nice work.
| WarriorHeart 1/20/05 . chapter 1
That last line... WOW.
| ratatooie 1/20/05 . chapter 1
It took me a few times to read this before it started to make sense to me, but it's gorgeous, almost frightening in a way. Nice work! - you are Mine said she