everything about this poem seems so haunting and soft...then the last line gives it that extra spark of vulnerability.

I don't know. I liked it, but it feels unfinished. Maybe that's the point? It does sound interesting. I especially like:

And you sometimes listen to what I sayWhen it’s most inconvenient

Maybe because I can relate? -_-" Anyway, nice work.

flo

That last line... WOW.

It took me a few times to read this before it started to make sense to me, but it's gorgeous, almost frightening in a way. Nice work! - you are Mine said she