Reviews for miscellaneous gyrations

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tesa131313 2006-12-09 ch 1,	abuseI like how this poem tells of an experience that you had. Like, you base it on something but as others read it it tells a different story. I like the way you write.
alligater20 2005-06-30 ch 1,	abuseI love it. The personal references such as "sparkles instead of **", when shared, make the reader feel like they're "in on the joke" too. Especially when explained. I liked the title too, that's what made me read it. "in character shoes of satin steel" - I am constantly stuck on that line! Once I think I have it figured out, it slips away and I have to figure it out again. I love your poetry and you continue to amaze me!
xo-lilacsxandxlolita-ox 2005-04-08 ch 1,	abuseWow. I'm finding myself in complete awe of your skills in poetry. I mean, this is brilliant, true brilliance. I love the lines "interchangeable adrogyny" and "we say 'sparkles' instead of '**' in our Latin American infatuation". You always got these extremely wonderful lines in your writing, and you always captivate me with your sheer talent. Excellent, as always. chibichocobo
lostontheroof 2005-03-28 ch 1,	abuseI thought this was cute, but the author's note made it more clear. I like how some of your stuff is so serious, but then you mix in these silly feel good poems that have just as much talent. Super.
stutter something profound 2005-03-07 ch 1,	abusethe poem kind of reminds me of a dance, perhaps a waltz, in and of itself. maybe i'm just insane. heh. i'm also digging the ambiguity. i like this, muchly. i'm sorry my review bites.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2005-03-07 ch 1,	abuseit was beautiful. I liked it. the gender ambiguity made it all the more interesting.
KonekOniko 2005-02-14 ch 1,	abuselol! I love dancing! It's so much fun! I'm nervous about competition though @-@, haha, putting that aside, loving the poem! so cute!
Made in U.S.A. 2005-02-02 ch 1,	abuseThat was really cute and I enjoyed reading it. Love your style and keep writing :D
Aimee Raven 2005-01-29 ch 1,	abuseLol! This is funny! I like it though ^_^, but I could never say sparkles instead of **...sweet poem! Love, Mia
reicheru* 2005-01-24 ch 1, anon.	abusehahass.. mambo sounds like fun yeah. cooking rocks dearr =) i like the second stanza. what are character shoes anyway? rock on dearr. lovee reicheru.
Cyssel 2005-01-23 ch 1,	abuseahh well, finally a break from the really long, verbose poems. I guess I kinda like this. not that I have much to say. -winter
tablesalt 2005-01-22 ch 1,	abuselove the line "you're leading man, or shall i lead?". never knew that character shoes are worn in Latin dance. Ah well, I'm dumb. (=
amphiboly 2005-01-22 ch 1,	abuseits a good one. i am doing the dance module too. it so rocks. ((:
matapokker 2005-01-22 ch 1,	abuseoh you're so lucky we only get chinese dance. and haha i love the stepping on each other's toes part. just wondered whether you use roses! like the waltz (:
magicbubble 2005-01-21 ch 1,	abuseahaha. aiyah we have chinese dance its hilarious. and woots i love short poems and this is a nice short poem! and its an interesting perspective of dance!

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