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Reviews For: The Promised Land
f34r3dl0s7s0ul 2005-01-23 . chapter 1
easy to relate to. yup you got it. feared lost soul. hehe congratulations lol jk...great poem.
BeautifulEcho 2005-01-20 . chapter 1
o *grins devillishly* love the angst in it. lol. overall, great poem. really and seriously. i wsh someone could be "that person" for me sometimes to just take me away from everything. but most of the times, my friends, like u :), are more than enough. liked all the details and i really liked the ending! keep dreaming, Dreamer!

~BeautifulEcho~
KyranHayyt 2005-01-20 . chapter 1
hey awesome poem, the minimal rhyming kept if from sounding childish, and the message is something we can all relate to.
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