I love it.Enough said :)

You had a very powerful ending to an extremely meaningful poem. I haven't read much but so far I like your approach to writing.

" Her silnet death..." A powerful way to end this poem. Left me shocked after reading this. Something I would deffinetly like to write.

~* Noelle *~

a little choopy, but my guess is that you inteded it to be, correct? whatever, it was still good!

the last two lines are wonderful

It's definitely still your style! I like how you put it that the blade was screaming yet her death was silent. For some reason, I feel like this was all performed in a kitchen... maybe it's the knief thing. Oh well, great poem.

BRAVO! Very very good! This is going on my favorites list. I love the way you lear us into a trap full of surprises, it's about suicide it seems. Very good, loved it! KEEP IT UP!