HAahahahha

Ahaha.. that was a bit disturbing and out of the norm but i liked it. xD

Witty and clever! Awesome job. :)

bloody hell, you write, don't you?

i'm not sure what i think of this.

ok, i'm still trying to think, but so far, nothing has come up.

it's different. whoopie.

luv Ife

'Tis a grand poem. I really love your writing, please keep it up.

I know your summary states that this is supposed to be humorous, but this has got to be my favorite poem out of everything that I’ve read so far on FP. I’ve read it through a few times and I really like it. I cannot explain why, because I’m an idiot, but it makes me want to say Wow! My favorite part would have to be: “You grind him now, you’ll grind into the core,” For some reason, this sparks some very captivating images in my mind.

This was...shall we say...interesting? I was really surprised when I read it. For some reason I was expecting some crude poem, but I surprised. It flowed really well, and your word use was awesome. Keep it up - anyone who knows the word callow deserves my applause.

Why, hello there! I like to review those who review me. Though I like reviews that give constructive criticism, I value all of my reviews. I will now spend some time trying to find out what you thought was immature, and change it. But, anyways, the reason I’m here is not I. Now, this poem you wrote: I really enjoyed it. Seriously. It was unlike anything I’ve read before, and I have read a lot, being on the coordinating team for my school’s literary arts magazine. One does get sick of “I’m so sad; you left me and now I want you back”. The flow was pretty much flawless, and the topic was very different. Personally, I am very much for gay rights. Very good job. Now, I’m off to read some more stuff. Farewell!

Raunchy. Nice job.

Much bondage action. Wow. That poem gets dirtier every time I read it. I like the language used though. It kind of gives it an age-old innocence; but at the same time the meanings are anything but.

Very, very clever. Somehow you've managed to make it both funny, and very dark.

Clever."I’ll give to you, my friend, my bondage best."

It's silly but really nice ^__^

I liked it!

that got more than a chuckle out of me. Very, very clever.

And disturbing. Don't forget disturbing.

haha great last two lines