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Reviews For: Apocalyptic Shakedown
Kilshiara 2005-01-21 . chapter 1
Oce again a poem of yours that I can half-grasp, then lose the meaning of half-way through. But I still like it.
KwazyKandyPie 2005-01-20 . chapter 1
oh wow, apocalyspe sounds scary.. .O_OXD XD, i love these lines:"No lions no tigers no bears

No youthful no future no brass

Along came a spider and hid deep inside her

Until all poisons prevailed"no tigers, no bears? oh my!! XD
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