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Icyfire4w5
2008-11-26
ch 1,
Your story has a good mix of narration and dialogue. You have summed their relationship up as an "addiction", which is very true.
FM Radio
2007-10-21
ch 1,
I enjoyed it. It's different. Not normal, but not totally and completely out there. You did a wonderful job.
KayB
2007-06-18
ch 1,
That was absolutely wonderful. So wonder, in fact, that I think I just might place this in my favorites.
Lightning Storm
2007-01-28
ch 1,
Well done, I know all about an addiction of that nature. You captured the feeling well. Not to mention, the ending was kind of hott as well, lol. Bravo
TwinkleHeart
2006-12-11
ch 1,
i gotta admit..this is the best short story ive ever read =D
flojo22811
2006-12-03
ch 1,
you really should write some more stories!
Ice and Snow
2006-06-13
ch 1,
i love this. it's like...one of my favorite stories so far. AWESOME.
emerald
2006-03-06
ch 1,
yeah i like it- more like love it. and that's crazy and creepy...addiction, not love, not lust but just crazy old addiction...cool...interesting plot.
Bek
2005-12-06
ch 1,
I liked it, and i thoiught you ended it brilliantly
Quoting a lie
2005-11-11
ch 1,
lmao. wat WUD ur mother say!? esp. afta reading sum of ur other stories... lmao. i luv this, and ALL ur other sotries that ive read so far. keep writing!
fire-fem
2005-09-12
ch 1,
I really love this story. Its such a treat for the senses!
d.fox
2005-05-19
ch 1,
Like most (if not all) of your other stories.. I love it.
mo
2005-03-17
ch 1,
...all i can say is, what would your mother say :)
NiteDreamer
2005-02-24
ch 1,
awesome short story...the way you described her in the beginning where she was being tormented by the "breakup" (or however they split) reminds me of me when i broke up w/ my ex but happily together with him now.
Kezza
2005-01-27
ch 1,
Great Short Story!!
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