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| Icyfire4w5 2008-11-26 ch 1, | Your story has a good mix of narration and dialogue. You have summed their relationship up as an "addiction", which is very true. |
| FM Radio 2007-10-21 ch 1, | I enjoyed it. It's different. Not normal, but not totally and completely out there. You did a wonderful job. |
| KayB 2007-06-18 ch 1, | That was absolutely wonderful. So wonder, in fact, that I think I just might place this in my favorites. |
| Lightning Storm 2007-01-28 ch 1, | Well done, I know all about an addiction of that nature. You captured the feeling well. Not to mention, the ending was kind of hott as well, lol. Bravo |
| TwinkleHeart 2006-12-11 ch 1, | i gotta admit..this is the best short story ive ever read =D |
| flojo22811 2006-12-03 ch 1, | you really should write some more stories! |
| Ice and Snow 2006-06-13 ch 1, | i love this. it's like...one of my favorite stories so far. AWESOME. |
| emerald 2006-03-06 ch 1, | yeah i like it- more like love it. and that's crazy and creepy...addiction, not love, not lust but just crazy old addiction...cool...interesting plot. |
| Bek 2005-12-06 ch 1, | I liked it, and i thoiught you ended it brilliantly |
| Quoting a lie 2005-11-11 ch 1, | lmao. wat WUD ur mother say!? esp. afta reading sum of ur other stories... lmao. i luv this, and ALL ur other sotries that ive read so far. keep writing! |
| fire-fem 2005-09-12 ch 1, | I really love this story. Its such a treat for the senses! |
| d.fox 2005-05-19 ch 1, | Like most (if not all) of your other stories.. I love it. |
| mo 2005-03-17 ch 1, | ...all i can say is, what would your mother say :) |
| NiteDreamer 2005-02-24 ch 1, | awesome short story...the way you described her in the beginning where she was being tormented by the "breakup" (or however they split) reminds me of me when i broke up w/ my ex but happily together with him now. |
| Kezza 2005-01-27 ch 1, | Great Short Story!! |