I really like this shot. It got me "addicted". What can I say, you wowwed me. I'm speechless--that's why I'm typing instead. ;)

Well, it pains me to say this, considering the bout of plagiarism going on around here - but considering that you signed your name Sandy and not Pam then you probably didn't post this story on the InuYasha Fanfiction section on .

Therefore, I have to deduced that you've been plagerized (under the name "Aphrodisiac", pen name: LadySugar", six years after you posted this...

Sorry to inform you in such an unpolished format but i'm not sure how to notify someone that they've been blatantly ripped off nearly verbatim (but with InuYasha character names replaced and added in)

you are one of the most amazing authors. ever.
and you're from canada too!

..i liked your other stories better, but this one is good too.

Your story has a good mix of narration and dialogue. You have summed their relationship up as an "addiction", which is very true.

I enjoyed it. It's different. Not normal, but not totally and completely out there. You did a wonderful job.

That was absolutely wonderful. So wonder, in fact, that I think I just might place this in my favorites.

Well done, I know all about an addiction of that nature. You captured the feeling well. Not to mention, the ending was kind of hott as well, lol. Bravo

i gotta admit..this is the best short story ive ever read =D

you really should write some more stories!

i love this. it's like...one of my favorite stories so far. AWESOME.

yeah i like it- more like love it. and that's crazy and creepy...addiction, not love, not lust but just crazy old addiction...cool...interesting plot.

I liked it, and i thoiught you ended it brilliantly

lmao. wat WUD ur mother say!? esp. afta reading sum of ur other stories... lmao. i luv this, and ALL ur other sotries that ive read so far. keep writing!

I really love this story. Its such a treat for the senses!