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Baphomet 2005-03-02 . chapter 16
I never was good at deriving meaning...but if it is a reference to a "family" now seperated im sure they miss you and Butress as well.
Macca Lane 2005-03-01 . chapter 1
a dream come ture is good and though it ** me up because it did make me think of something that i wnat to happen and problaby wont, well it wont and i am stupid thinking about it, sory for oging on with myself great poetry
Myra Kilgore 2005-02-28 . chapter 44
Oh babe!...These are so beautifuly, they always make me feel better...even the slightly depressing ones, simply because I know that everything is a pure emotion and straight from you heart and soul...kinda wish I could write like that. Love ya lot's babe

Love ya,Myra.
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 12
Everyone has dreams,

Many happily fulfilled,—

Life's a lottery.
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 11
¡Anger swelling red!

¡Turns another's eye to black!

Pink the steak applied.
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 10
Patient love, warm hugs,

White hair gives the gift of time,—

Sunset's glowing sheen.
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 9
Beauty doth walk soft,

When she treads upon man's heart,—

Nothing visible. -m-
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 8
!Ah, he comes again!

Impertinence in person,—

¿Impersonating?
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 7
¿How can love advice?

It's a storm loos'd on the soul,—

¡Crash of sea on rocks!
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 5
Flute longs for player,

Firm warm lips that would move her,—

Hi pitched xtasi. -m-
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 4
Mists washed down your eyes,

As you sweetly sang a chant,—

Moon in lowland fog. -m-
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 3
There's only a drink,

Left 'tween sanity & me,—

¿Which one is crazy? -m-
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 2
¿Was it a long war,—

That you emerged casual?

¿Or, stretching mind's eye? -m-
Manuel Fajar 2005-01-21 . chapter 1
Cold owns—stone house old,

Lavender quilt filled with you,—

Love's habitation. -m-
Myra Kilgore 2005-01-20 . chapter 20
oh Ty these are great...very cool of you to make a collection, I have to check back for more additions.
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