|Reviews for an odyssey|
| AntiPleasure 1/25/05 . chapter 2
More descriptive than the first one, which is a good addition. Although there are some words repeated, the style fits and your diction fits perfectly.
| AntiPleasure 1/25/05 . chapter 1
*falls on floor in awe* do you know how hard it is to find poets that actually write poems inspired by other classic POETS? I swear, no one on this site takes the time to read the old works and this... is just a beautiful picture painted. That's all I can say, wonderfully done.
| Cyssel 1/24/05 . chapter 1
Good choice of words. Keep up the good writing! -winter
| tablesalt 1/21/05 . chapter 1
This is beautiful. Although I didn't exactly understand every single line, I realised that I /felt/ the poem instead. And I like that. (
| Manuel Fajar 1/20/05 . chapter 1
¿What is it prevents,
Mind from setting motion to,
Duty's portion? —m—
| Blayne 1/20/05 . chapter 1
Nicely done. I love how you used this in a comparison to Odysseus' voyage. It's wonderful, good job.