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| Ajna 2005-01-20 ch 1, | abuseLove this poem. The anger is strong but not overwhelming. Keep writing! -Anathema |
| Joewhatever 2005-01-20 ch 1, | abuseI liked this. You deliver everything neatly, and the words flow perfectly. The imagery is interesting, and the specific meaning of the poem is vague, leaving much room for interpretation. The wording was spiffy. Nice write. |