  ciara 2005-02-24 . chapter 3 omgawesome storyNiko is kewl...please make him hot!
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  Longhair 2005-02-20 . chapter 3Eh. If she had magical powers and could kill everyone, I'd befriend her. Mainly to save myself, but yeah. She reminds me of Carrie, in a way. You should dump blood on her in the next chapter. That'd be cool. |
 Fedora Jim 2005-02-11 . chapter 3i would've reviewed a long time ago but my author's alert doodad isn't working quite properly. HEY IT'S CIARA! HI CIARA! IT'S ANNE! WOOT!
ahem. ALMOST WORLD DESTRUCTION BUT NOT QUITE! ANGLE...ER, ANGEL PEOPLE!! where do you get the awesome names for the people! i have enough trouble as it is! |
| ciara 2005-01-23 . chapter 1 Good job katie... it sounds kewl let me no when you finish a chapter... |
| Longhair 2005-01-22 . chapter 1 Guess who's back to annoy on a different computer.
Now THIS one sounds more interesting than pirates. Hooray for world destruction!
It's still hard to believe you can actually write something SERIOUS. To believe you act THAT weird at school, then come home and write about world destruction is just... unbelievable.
And because I lost chapter 20, YOU WILL BE A GUEST CHARACTER. I originally had you mentioned as maybe becoming a best character, but you were too spazzy and it DIDN'T WORK.
And my face still hurts from yesterday. Tell Suzanne to leave me alone. Nyeh.
"I feel like getting information out of you on AIM. So if you're on, beware."
Now downloading AIM... and playing guitar while I'm waiting...
-LH |
| Fedora Jim 2005-01-22 . chapter 1 wow, freaky! WORLD DESTRUCTION! |
| Keira Kotler 2005-01-22 . chapter 1 This story definitely grabbed me and left me wanting more... The writing is strong and clear, and the way in which information is presented is captivating. More more more, please! |
| Pam 2005-01-21 . chapter 1 I think it has potential. The little girl doesn't have blonde hair, does she? I like the pace of the story and the voice is great.You've got my attention, so write the rest of it! |
 tawnyfawn 2005-01-20 . chapter 1Oh, sounds exciting! =D I like the point of the view the prologue is told from. Will all the story be told from this POV, or will it change? Anyway, it sounds like an awsome power to have, and the story is already set up for a good plot. On the whole, a really good first chapter. Especially seeing as there were no spelling mistakes (unlike me! =P) or gramatical errors or anyhting. Well done.
from fawny |
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