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| me10 2005-01-29 ch 1, | abusethis is so beautiful! i love some of the metaphors and imagery you included. especially the 'knitting' of a melody!great! only crtisism is that the last bit confused me a bit, but then again i am a little slow. |
| simpleplan13 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abusevery true and well written |
| hiding behind amber eyes 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abusei understand this, and i think it's a really good point. (why couldnt it have been an electric guitarist?) lol good job! ps-its snowing here, is it snowing where u r? |
| RatherFresh 2005-01-20 ch 1, | abusewow. this is really good. i like your writing style.. great job. |