I love this so much and it was probably the best school assignment you ever received, ever. You are one of the best writers that I'm fortunate to know and I'm so glad that you share your talent.

wow.. that was uberlong, but insanely good.. I love hte repition of that one line, but adding more to it each time and the descriptions and the format are ll just wonderful.. i might separate it into stanzas though

wow... really good poem...