Cool. Long time, no review. I like the IPT stuff. This acutally reminds me of my own poem, Primer. You should read it. Has kind of the same message, but it's longer. Anyhoo, very nice job with this.

Beautifully written. I found one thing that might or might not be spelled correctly: stanza 7, line 1- "easle" should be "easel". Otherwise, good poem.

very surprising ending, but what cani expect from a mad poet? wonderful

-firehair

Nice. I like the flow, and the all in all of the imagery is impressive.