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| Moonlight Tigress 2005-06-04 ch 1,   | YES! BRILLIANT!just what i feel now for my nephew. Although... hes only six months...but yeah, sometimes ya just know a friends bf is gonna hurt them, and... well... this was well EXTREMELY well written and i can so relate to it! |
| One Desire 2005-01-21 ch 1, | my sister told me about an incident similar to this. |
| jammi 2005-01-21 ch 1, | "I have my eye on you. You hurt her you forfeit your life." Nice use of violence there hon. lol, I like how you manage to convey your emotions :D |