YES! BRILLIANT!just what i feel now for my nephew. Although... hes only six months...but yeah, sometimes ya just know a friends bf is gonna hurt them, and... well... this was well EXTREMELY well written and i can so relate to it!

my sister told me about an incident similar to this.

"I have my eye on you.

You hurt her you forfeit your life."

Nice use of violence there hon. lol, I like how you manage to convey your emotions :D