Interesting piece. There were parts that I liked, and then there were parts that I didn't. I especially liked this part:

Say hello to JesusAnd ** him 'till he screamsWhile you are at itGive him a kiss for me

Take your ** religionAnd press it on to me

Learn to spell: "hesetation," "tomarrow,"consiquences." 'Cohorse' is not a word. The 'Jesus' stanza is pretty powerful and grotesque, but the trite, unimaginably overrused lines in the next stanza completely ruin that piece of ingenuity. Overall, it's pretty mediocre--it has a few good parts, but there isn't much in here that's really deep or meaningful.

wow, she must be one heck of a...err..."prostitute" ...gaah, i need better words...but, wonderfully written poem either way!!i especially liked these lines:"Say hello to Jesus

And** him 'till he screams

While you are at it

Give him a kiss for me"

This is scary and erotic at the same time. It's very well written, and the anger just seeps out of every word. It's beautiful and sad. The best parts were the religious tidbits; they're just so strong. Amazing.