Oh, I really enjoyed this chapter! I'm going to continue reading until the end, unless something happens to me. (Like anything would happen to me anyway.)

I find myself a little interested in this storyline. I'm curious as how all of this started. Maybe I should continue reading to find out?

Not bad! Especially the ending.
However, seriously too much angst and whining. It's like- I'm a good girl, I have this deep dark secret, OMG what should I do??!! The writing pulls it off, but not everything.

I would have never expected to be leaving this sort of review for THIS story, but


THAT ENDING WAS SO CUTE! XD XD XD XD XD...

~mail you soon.

DM1

I loved your story. It was beautiful. It was amazing. I was so happy when I checked and realized you finished it, and sad at the same time because this beautifully macabre tale was over. The ending confused me a little though. Did Lou take Abby's name and pretend to be her? That is what I perceived. Also, is there/ will there be a sequel?

not chap 7?

Haha XD I finally got to finish the darn thing. I really liked where it went, though the ending caught me by surprise. I was a little lost too, not quite knowing who it was that was talking in the last chapter. Lou didn't kill Abby, right? It was that "overly eager boy", nee? And 'August'? v_v I suppose this is what happens when you spread out reading a story over so many months. I'll bug you about the details personally. Haha.

Anyways. Good job *applauds* If you want to send it off to a publisher, go right ahead dear. Make sure you MAKE revisions, though don't make them GINORMOUS, like mine were. :) Those cost me a very good story, you know.

Love always!

Hm. I liked it alot actually. It is kinda different yet really good. Think you meant "Lou" though at the end, instead of "Abby" Other then that was awesome.

Is that Lou at the end?

Woah. Strange there at the end.

I've got to hurry and finish this up..

Awhh..

Hey! WHERE'S THE EVIL LAUGH!?!

If you're worried about our parents not liking it just use a psydomneum like you've got now. If you go to the right publisher, they'll go crazy over it, all of that "realistic youth problems" and all sorts of that crap. They'll probably use it for some sort of campaign to get money out of the government.

Yay! Things start happening!