haha
WOW.
lol.
that's a good time.
good job.

haha.
this story gets wierder and wierder.
good job though.
a few grammar mistakes but overall ok.
=]

haha.
that was wild.
this is a very random thing isn't it.
do you actually think these through or is it just like a whatever works whenever thing?

haha.
you know what?
i got kinda freaked out like halfway with ms. baxter cuz that'd be me!
haha.
i'm hayley baxter and i'm a ms.
so yeahh.
haha.
good job.
gory and kinda odd but good job.
lol.

haha wow.
angry fiesty kitty.
haha.

Uh, wow umm...hahaha.
interesting very interesting.
interesting writing style too.
since you've read and reviewed hellfire numerous times (a new chapter is up btw) i thought i'd stop in and read some of yours!!

Uhh, Falla and the mother figure are both insane.

Funny Story
Nice

Tag with sniper rilfes! fun!

Rob's mom didn't feed him for two days! Falla robbed a candy store! lol!

Rob's mom is interesting. This is so funny!

haha, ah well, i await more dude!

till next post,

drakkarim

oh goddamn it when will robs nightmeare end?! just kidding, lol, i hope he suffers more

ouch, never give falla candy thats for sure. lol

dude this story is so damn hilarious, but uh, the whole script feel isnt what i expected in a story. it makes me feel like im reading a script.