I liked it. From the title Decayed you'd expect something darker, but this was good nonetheless.

Nothing terribly technical springs to mind to say about this, but I think it's very interesting (meaning that it provokes thought, not that it's weird and I just don't want to say that :P Doing so would be highly hipocritical, anyway...)

The only comment that I really have is that this seems like it might be from the point of view of someone who is obssessed with the person to whom she is speaking, which is partially why I find it so interesting. (And having said that, I hope it wasn't based on real life ^_^() :P) Analyzing this poem would be fun...if my brain would let me. I'm not in English class, and therefore, it doesn't feel like working on that level just right now :P Overall, very good poem ^_^ *flees to read more*

Beautiful. That is the only word to describe this. It's wonderful, Ash-chan.