Gorgeous and inspirational. The well-chosen language created some vivid images, which in turn gave the poem a fantasy feel to it. And such poems are always an enjoyable read for me. Great work :)

*cosmo-queen*

majesty tear me away and make me vanish in your scraves for shows

beautiful

beautiful, beautiful piece. i love this. well written in an amazing style. you painted breathtaking images in my mind with your words. the rhyme and repetition work well with this piece. awesome work. i absolutely love your writing. :) keep up the wonderful work.

I loved this poem..vivid images...great concept and beautifully written:) I really liked the line, "fly past the boundaries of trapped humanity"...keep writing!

beautiful... absolutely beautiful. I loved just the words of your poem and how you wrote them, but then when reading that it portrayed the moon it made it even more... ingenious (spelling!?)

Great poem my friend, excellent work!

Beautiful...O.O Gorgeous poem. Well worded and just breathtaking.

~* Noelle *~