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Reviews For: My Shadow
lenastar
2005-02-07
ch 1, 		abuseIt's pretty good. Ur only errors are third sentence, "ben" is supposed to be "been", and in the last sentence, after getting up, "it" I think is supposed to be "is" Otherwise your poem is pretty good!!
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