   Estelin 2007-06-16 . chapter 3this story is excellent. keep up the good work and writing. |
 Skyla Moon 2005-05-20 . chapter 3Oh, wow! I love it!! I didn't know you wrote. Well, the description is awesome! And, of course I love the death and immortality - awesome idea. I hope to see the next chapter someday.
~ Sadista, or so Sarah calls me. |
 Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-03-03 . chapter 3Wow, Keiran's cold, but he sounds really hot too!! Poor Adriana's dad, that sucks. I wanna know how Keiran's going to do in her other family members, tell me now! I know where you live! Actually I guess I'll just have to wait for you to finish writing the next chapters. Write faster! |
 Dare-Sonar 2005-01-29 . chapter 2NO! Hurry up with the next one! |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-01-28 . chapter 2 Cool! I got a head ache at the moment, so I can't really think of anything else to say. Great chapter! Keep going! |
| Dare-Sonar 2005-01-24 . chapter 1 Dude- Sweetass. Keep on rocking on this story!-nicole |
| Chicanery A. Beguile 2005-01-22 . chapter 1 O, cool! It sounds good already! Keep going! |
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