AW! i showed this to my friend Em, and she thinks your a VERY talented writer! well done! i like this one the best. parina x

great...its so refreshing to see forgiveness, i have a hard time forgiving my gf sometimes...this poem gives me hope...its really uplifting.

Beautiful. I love the extended metaphor of the angel. Your writing praises those gentle feminine qualities that we do not see often today; it takes me back to the time periods in which women were always called ladies and given the highest overall gentle flow and rhythm of the poem creates an almost ironical feeling near the end, emphasizing the actual things described. Superb job!

*added to favorite stories list