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| Lachrymosa 2007-04-29 ch 1,  | abuse"Allowing me to see through the fog / So I may view this tainted rainbow"... ahh, I just love that. ^^ Interesting perception. |
| D L Dzioba 2005-02-26 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting view of a rainbow. |
| Finger Dingbat 2005-01-26 ch 1, | abusewell, that certainly makes us all think of rainbow's differintally! but then again, i've never really liked the happy ditzy way people always think of rainbows,A.K.A if everyone looked at things the way you did, we'd all be in a much intresting aand confusing place! |
| f34r3dl0s7s0ul 2005-01-23 ch 1, | abusegood poem...i wont be able to look at another rainbow the same way = )...but dats a good thing...keep it up |
| love between the radio stat... 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abuseWow! I loved it! Simple and yet with depth. I still like my rainbows though... |
| Wishdreamer89 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abusewow, intense. u can write. see 2 some one my work please cya! |
| BeautifulEcho 2005-01-22 ch 1, | abusethat was really good cuz it made me see a rainbow in a different light! i really loved it and ima put it under my favorites. it sounded really sad and misery-filled, which i liekd bcuz it was different coming form you. ttyl keep writing, which i know u will! :) ~BeautifulEcho~ |