Yeah, i have to agree with you on that, young drivers(especialy) today didn't really pay the attention on the road, it is so dangerous unless they realizes that there is a responsibility to handle when sitting the wheel...

This was a cool poem, I thought. Really metaphorical, and I especially liked the "Some race ahead..." verse. Good work, chica! Oh, and thanks for reviewing my poem, too. ^_^

wow. superb way of incorporating everyday things & metaphorising (is that a word?) them into less obvious trains of thought.

wonderful job.

-lin

Lovely. I like that you use images from the everyday and superimpose upon them philosophical thought. It would be nice, I think, if everyone could see all the signs. Take off their blinders and their blinkers and their sunshades. Heh.

That's good, and true. Some just ignore all signs because they have seen them before, they don't take them in anymore. I lOVED it!